Yesterday we went to the Aviva stadium. We had to get up at six o'clock in the morning to catch the bus.It was a long journey ,about three and a half hours.When we arrived it was already half ten.We got off the bus and met our tour guide.We got a full tour of the stadium and got to go into the players tunnel. Afterwards we went into a room for some speeches with regard to Racism.We had entered a competition.We came sixth out of eighty!!We won a brand new digital camera and a plaque.It was a great day
by Josh
you forgot your capital on "WE".
ReplyDeleteyou wrote "INT".
you forgot your fullstop at the end.
you wrote "CAM" and you forgot the capital in "JOSH"